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Poetry of Dorothy Epp

Topic 47 · 10 responses · archived october 2000
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~dorothy seed
My poems.
~dorothy #1
When we were dreaming leopards stalked the city engines stalled left us stranded you slid under a rock while I circled the cliffs I had no appetite for mice but you would swallow them whole and simile in your cozy way. At the end of the raspberry row where the fences join the barn a walnut tree spreads across their shadows and miles away where the field ends a train with cars named BC Rail Alberta Grain and Saskatchewan hoots at me as it takes the tracks to the last station in Canada D.H.E.
~terry #2
These, I believe, are two separate excerpts from larger poems, is that right?
~SBRobinson #3
Lovely Dorothy - I admire your talent. Are you going to post the poems in their entirety here?
~MarciaH #4
Welcome to Spring, Dorothy and Thank You for sharing your talent with those of us who are only able to appreciate genius and not to create it. More please!
~MarkG #5
Very enigmatic, Dorothy - cool! Was that a smile or a simile in the first verse? :-)
~dorothy #6
yes these were two seperate poems. Thanks for the comments.
~terry #7
They are wonderful poems Dorothy, I hope to see more of your works here and have a discussion about your goals as a writer and what you are doing. Can you tell us about the poetry group that you attend?
~MarciaH #8
Yes....Please!
~terry #9
http://www.spring.net/poems is a place that I helped Dorothy set up for her poetry. She plans to rotate poems in and out of there on a regular basis.
~MarciaH #10
Thanks!
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