~wolf
Mon, Jul 6, 1998 (00:06)
seed
~pmnh
Mon, Jul 6, 1998 (00:06)
#1
(anyone home?)
~wolf
Sat, Aug 1, 1998 (14:33)
#2
Once, My Lover
We met, by chance, upon a Spring morn
Was it then, my lover you became?
You keep near me, watch from afar
And it is that which burns me still.
If, upon a Summer's day, we meet again,
Continue what we silenced that day?
Your face still I see every moment.
But the shame in me wasn't yours
We belonged, it was those that looked.
And, if you, if me, we would be lost
To the stars we counted that night.
Harbor no inhibitions, take me
Again to that day. Shall we plan?
Oh, I ache for your touch from
Fleeting memories in my dreams.
If we meet by chance, a Spring morn,
Would you again my lover become?
~wolf
Sun, Aug 2, 1998 (15:41)
#3
In the storm he would take me.
His lips and tongue explorers
In a jungle filled with wild flowers.
I cry out to him again and
He feeds me nectar and creme.
We fly with our bodies entwined
Within the sweet web of surrender
And he meets me over and over.
His touch is warm and commanding
I cannot ignore the demanding fire
Within my womb. He is the master.
His trade is my passion.
~wolf
Sun, Aug 2, 1998 (15:44)
#4
Because I love;
I wish to understand your heart.
I want to feel your emptiness
So I can fill it with kindness
And mercy, because I love.
But you steal it like a hungry child.
Your voice is a hand on my skin.
You have brought me grief,
I come back like a fool to hear
Your sound. Whisper in my ear.
Because I love;
I feed off the aura your words give.
Encourage my voice so I may sing.
Knowing how you hunger, truly, but you
Are not ready for the feast prepared.
And I want you. Speak to me in prose.
Can I not be a Venus to anyone?
You are so vain and pompous, yes.
Love me like a hungry, greedy soul.
So I give you kindness and mercy,
Because I love.
~wolf
Sun, Aug 2, 1998 (15:46)
#5
Would I give to you my soul?
And what proof would you give
That my self will be kept safe?
Would I give it to the Angel
Who stays with me everywhere?
And could I trust it in those hands?
Mortal beings cannot be held in
That high esteem, nor the angels,
Subject to temptations like we.
But if you ask me, I would give you
My love. That would be a gift
I would never ask to be returned.
~wolf
Sun, Aug 2, 1998 (15:48)
#6
Can I take myself a lover or two?
Would they drown the sound of your name
On my lips?
With each love you take in your arms,
Do they remove the wish for my kiss
On your lips?
And each time you hurt me, be my embrace,
Would you want me then? Calling my name
From your lips?
Time and again I return to the fire for warmth
And it blows out cold but again I call to you
From my lips.
~KitchenManager
Sun, Aug 2, 1998 (16:03)
#7
(you oughta go off on biz trips more often...)
~wolf
Sun, Aug 2, 1998 (17:19)
#8
am tired of them, really, what? you tired of seeing me here? *wink*
~KitchenManager
Sun, Aug 2, 1998 (17:50)
#9
nope, you just always seem to have a bunch of new
poems to post for our perusal...what do you think
of the current changes around here?
~paula
Sun, Aug 2, 1998 (20:17)
#10
hey... mind if i put something of mine in here?
(not like any of youd really stop me, i guess...)
in a winter- a body left bare
laying numb on words, warmed
to his touch
flesh wrote in verse and
i felt, deliriously-
each of his caresses
so hes breathed me, that very day, and
ive lived in him since
no other love within me, nor
inside him dwelled,
only i was only he was
truly
purely
mine
dared to Dream- a maiden
but, no airy voice would peirce
the thick of our sighs
no eyes, no imagined embraces
would pale the furious, holy
red that clothed us
drowning in the sugar sweet syrup
of delusions. quietly shunning
truth, she would recall a
never was.
and the wide eyed girl
squints; chokes- in the mist
and fog of pastel visions.
she hated pastels
and couldnt bear that they
refused to see
the bold, dark colours of
an us, a we, that stole-
the imperial violet from twilight
the cold blue of stares
and the honest red of an august sun
i cry- hear it, though- see
the heavens break in my shreik, see them
fall in every whisper
and watch the stars wince sharp
to my thoughts
and i would think, strong, i would think
in a green eyed afternoon,
id think;
sweetie...
he never was your lover.
~wolf
Mon, Aug 3, 1998 (10:05)
#11
you are more than welcome to post your work here paula, please do!
wer: the stuff looks good. have been really tired so haven't done anymore
work here myself (sorry y'all). and being away means i think too much so i
write!
~KitchenManager
Mon, Aug 3, 1998 (23:11)
#12
and to which stuff do you reference?
~wolf
Tue, Aug 4, 1998 (08:41)
#13
the bars at the top (did you do anything else i don't know about?)
~KitchenManager
Tue, Aug 4, 1998 (09:05)
#14
not in here...
~KitchenManager
Tue, Aug 4, 1998 (09:06)
#15
well, except center the full name/change it thing, but did that
everywhere else, as well...
~TIM
Sun, Nov 22, 1998 (19:54)
#16
Check out the "Song of Solomon" in the Bible. ( in some translations, "song of
Songs", or "Canticles")
~wolf
Sun, Nov 22, 1998 (23:03)
#17
been there done that. beautiful piece. even if you're not a believer, the
Bible holds many wonderful writings and is an excellent source of history as
well as common truths.
~TIM
Sun, Nov 22, 1998 (23:29)
#18
Very true, not to mention, it's great literature! Ever heard the song,"TURN,
TURN, TURN"?.........Ecclesiastes Ch 3 first 10 verses.
~wolf
Mon, Nov 23, 1998 (12:04)
#19
indeed! a time for everything.....
~TIM
Mon, Nov 23, 1998 (14:11)
#20
That is one of my favorite songs!!
~wolf
Mon, Aug 16, 1999 (22:40)
#21
wow, has it been nearly a year?
~Irishprincess
Mon, Nov 8, 1999 (18:41)
#22
Here's another topic that looks like it needs some revitalizing, so here goes:
THE VINE
by Robert Herrick
I dreamed this mortal part of mine
Was metamorphosed to a vine;
Which crawling one and every way,
Enthralled my dainty Lucia.
Me thought, her long small legs and thighs
I with my tendrils did surprise;
Her belly, buttocks, and her waist
By my soft nervelets were embraced:
About her head I writhing hung,
And with rich clusters (hid among
The leaves) her temples I behung:
So that my Lucia seemed to me
Young Bacchus ravished by his tree.
My curls about her neck did crawl,
And arms and hands they did enthrall;
So that she could not freely stir,
(All parts there made one prisoner.)
But when I crept with leaves to hide
Those parts, which maids keep unespied,
Such fleeting pleasures there I took,
That with the fancy I awoke;
And found (Ah me!) this flesh of mine
More like a stock, than like a vine.
~MarciaH
Mon, Nov 8, 1999 (19:21)
#23
Oooh, Good one!!! Lusty, indeed! Thanks!
~MarciaH
Mon, Nov 8, 1999 (19:31)
#24
Wolfie, I never read this Topic before. You write incredible stuff! (Some of the old topics I do not read for my own sanity!) Thanks for your poems and I now see how very much your muse is worth to this enterprise. How could it dare desert you?!
~Irishprincess
Mon, Nov 8, 1999 (20:13)
#25
Here are some little excerpts from some poems by Aphra Behn, which unfortunately I don't have the titles for:
In pity to our sex sure thou wert sent,
That we might love, and yet be innocent:
For sure no crime with thee we can commit;
Or if we should--thy form excuses it.
For who, that gathers fairest flowers believes
A snake lies hid beneath the fragrant leaves.
*****
Though 'tis a mighty power must move
The soul to this degree of love,
And though with virtue I the world perplex,
Lysander finds the weakness of my sex,
So Helen while from Theseus' arms she fled,
To charming Paris yields her heart and bed.
~wolf
Tue, Nov 9, 1999 (20:02)
#26
marcia *beam* thanks dearie!
amy, thanks for posting some good stuff in this forlorn topic!
~Irishprincess
Tue, Nov 9, 1999 (20:49)
#27
Hmm, how odd that a topic on poems of desire should be "forlorn"...
THE LETTER
by Amy Lowell
Little cramped words scrawling all over the paper
Like draggled fly's legs,
What can you tell the flaring moon
Through the oak leaves?
Or of my uncurtained window and the bare floor
Spattered with moonlight?
Your silly quirks and twists have nothing in them
Of blossoming hawthorns,
And this paper is dull, crisp, smooth, virgin of loveliness
Beneath my hand.
I am tired, Beloved, of chafing my heart against
The want of you;
Of squeezing it into little inkdrops,
And posting it.
And I scald alone, here, under the fire
Of the great moon.
~MarciaH
Thu, Nov 11, 1999 (00:52)
#28
I am tired, Beloved, of chafing my heart against
The want of you;
Amy, could we write volumes on this very subject, even though mine was so long ago? *big sigh*
~Irishprincess
Sat, Nov 13, 1999 (13:11)
#29
KIDNAP POEM
by Nikki Giovanni
ever been kidnapped
by a poet
if i were a poet
i'd kidnap you
put you in my phrases and meter
you to jones beach
or maybe coney island
or maybe just to my house
lyric you in lilacs
dash you in the rain
blend into the beach
to complement my see
play the lyre for you
ode you with my love song
anything to win you
wrap you in the red Black green
show you off to mama
yeah if i were a poet, i'd kid
nap you
(I love the line "lyric you in lilacs"--I use that phrase whenever I can!)
~Irishprincess
Sat, Nov 13, 1999 (13:20)
#30
PIAZZA PIECE
by John Crowe Ransom
--I am a gentleman in a dustcoat trying
To make you hear. Your ears are soft and small
And listen to an old man not at all,
They want the young men's whispering and sighing.
But see the roses on your trellis dying
And hear the spectral singing of the moon;
For I must have my lovely lady soon,
I am a gentleman in a dustcoat trying.
--I am a lady young in beauty waiting
Until my truelove comes, and then we kiss.
But what grey man among the vines is this
Whose words are dry and faint as in a dream?
Back from my trellis, Sir, before I scream!
I am a lady young in beauty waiting.
~MarciaH
Sat, Nov 13, 1999 (14:22)
#31
The first one is lovely even though I know Jones Beach and it isn't all that lyrical...but love the lilac line - my favorite flower fragrance from childhood.
The second one is sad...
~MarkG
Mon, Nov 15, 1999 (06:10)
#32
Thanks Amy. As ever, poems quite outside my experience, and fascinating. I am trying to work out if the lovely John Crowe Ransom sonnet is cryptic; although I might guess the "gentleman in a dustcoat" (a book) I can't assign the "lady young in beauty" to anything.
Was it a subliminal pun to post a kidnap poem followed by a Ransom poem?
~MarciaH
Mon, Nov 15, 1999 (13:35)
#33
Ransome pun - Mark, how brilliant to note that! It had quite escaped me. The man is very clever and is readable on many levels.
~Irishprincess
Mon, Nov 15, 1999 (22:39)
#34
Good grief, I posted those and I didn't even think of that! I have a tendency to do that--I make puns when I don't intend to, and people think I'm much wittier than I really am!
~wolf
Tue, Nov 16, 1999 (21:48)
#35
*lol*
~Irishprincess
Thu, Nov 18, 1999 (14:13)
#36
I know this is a incredibly common and over-anthologized poem, but I was thinking about it because someone is playing coy with me, and it made me think of this poem.
TO HIS COY MISTRESS
by Andrew Marvell
Had we but world enough and time,
This coyness, Lady, were no crime.
We would sit down and think which way
To walk, and pass our long love's day.
Thou by the Indian Ganges' side
Shouldst rubies find; I by the tide
Of Humber would complain. I would
Love you ten years before the Flood,
And you should, if you please, refuse
Till the Conversion of the Jews.
My vegetable love should grow
Vaster than empires, and more slow.
An hundred years should go to praise
Thine eyes, and on thy forehead gaze,
Two hundred to adore each breast,
But thirty thousand to the rest.
And age at least to every part,
And the last age should show your heart.
For, Lady, you deserve this state,
Nor would I love at lower rate.
But at my back I always hear
Time's winged chariot hurrying near,
And yonder all before us lie
Deserts of vast eternity.
Thy beauty shall no more be found,
Nor in thy marble vault shall sound
My echoing song; then worms shall try
That long preserved virginity,
And your quaint honor turn to dust,
And into ashes all my lust.
The grave's a fine and private place,
But none, I think, do there embrace.
Now therefore, while the youthful hue
Sits on thy skin like morning glew,
And while thy willing soul transpires
At every pore with instant fires,
Now let us sport us while we may;
And now, like amorous birds of prey,
Rather at once our time devour
Than languish in his slow-chapped power.
Let us roll all our strength and all
Our sweetness up into one ball
And tear our pleasures with rough strife
Thorough the iron gates of life.
Thus, though we cannot make our sun
Stand still, yet we will make him run.
~MarciaH
Thu, Nov 18, 1999 (14:32)
#37
Good poem...I have known the feeling, as well, but the guy in college lost me and I married another...!
~Irishprincess
Thu, Nov 18, 1999 (21:50)
#38
His loss!
~MarciaH
Fri, Nov 19, 1999 (00:12)
#39
So I was told. Why did it take so long to get over the hurt inside if that were the case? (Rhetorical question)
~MarciaH
Fri, Nov 19, 1999 (00:13)
#40
Btw,...Thanks for the supporting thought! *hugs* Amy...you are ever there for me.
~Irishprincess
Fri, Nov 19, 1999 (21:00)
#41
...as you are for me! *hugs*
~wolf
Sun, May 14, 2000 (19:24)
#42
this is brand new today:
The Marble Halls of Light
Dance with me, my Dreamer.
Our footsteps fall like feathers.
Your eyes a burning ember
In the Marble Halls of Light.
Your touch is my addiction
Of moonlit Summer dreams,
Of Spring and Fall and Winter
In the Marble Halls of Light.
To dance with you, My Dreamer,
A wish to have come true.
Our hearts follow the rhythm
In the Marble Halls of Light.
How my heart does yearn for
Your heart to beat with mine.
Meet me there, I pray you,
In the Marble Halls of Light.
~MarciaH
Sun, May 14, 2000 (19:36)
#43
Oh Wolfie! You wrote my dream into your poem as well as others, I am sure.
Viennese Waltzes in Marble halls with the tall handsome man who can do it in a straight line... Wow! Thank you!
~wolf
Sun, May 14, 2000 (19:38)
#44
i knew you'd understand it and surely others have dreams of their own marble halls!
~MarciaH
Sun, May 14, 2000 (19:44)
#45
Indeed! Mine has been since I was a little girl!
~sociolingo
Tue, May 16, 2000 (18:42)
#46
Too true! Thanks Wolfie.
~wolf
Fri, May 19, 2000 (18:31)
#47
wrote this last night:
Temptation is questioned.
Whose sin do we make,
If you have the hunger
And I've made the feast?
~MarciaH
Fri, May 19, 2000 (18:35)
#48
Ummm! Yes, I know...!
~wolf
Tue, May 23, 2000 (20:25)
#49
and this today:
The piercing stare of your eyes
Makes me weak in the knees
And I'm made aware that
I have your attention.
The accidental touch
Makes me draw in a breath
And I'm made aware that
It was no accident.
The casual chatter
Belies the agenda
And I'm made aware that
It's wrought with meaning.
********
Give a reason for my heart aflutter,
For my weakness in standing,
For the glow everyone sees.
Validate the butterflies
When you walk in the room and
Whenever I think of you again.
Let this not be for naught
For wishful thinking, hopeful
My affect be the same with you.
~MarciaH
Tue, May 23, 2000 (20:44)
#50
....*S I G H*..... Been there, done that; still there, doing that....
~MarciaH
Tue, May 23, 2000 (20:50)
#51
How long till Monday? Or is it Saturday?
~wolf
Tue, May 23, 2000 (20:59)
#52
*sigh* too long.
~MarciaH
Wed, May 24, 2000 (19:01)
#53
...I know...*hugs*
~MarciaH
Wed, May 24, 2000 (19:02)
#54
(I'm beginnning to hate these "FORGOT" buttons. They are beginning to make me feel bad ...)
~MarciaH
Fri, Mar 8, 2002 (22:13)
#55
Translating amorous couplets
A labour of love
BY MARK DRAGOUMIS
CREDIT should be given where credit is due. A
Greek-American Professor, Mr Stylianos V
Spyridakis, translated and Aristide D Caratzas
published the Mantinades. Selected Love Distichs of
Crete. So what? You may ask. So the translations respect both the fifteen
syllable metre and the rhyme. That is what.
Written mostly during the Venetian period (their name comes from the Italian
mattinata, or morning song) in the Cretan vernacular, they blend so successfully
old Greek poetic motifs with romantic love that they are still being created and
sung at village festivals, weddings, baptisms and other joyful events in Crete.
This publication deals only with the 'love distichs' or couplets.
The pain and sorrow of unrequited love is vividly portrayed:
"�� ��������� ��� ������, ��� �� �� ������������
������� ��' ������� �'�����, ��� ��� ��� ��������."
(A lonely chapel on the hill, silent and forlorn
resembles he who's in love, but from his love is torn.)
Here the need to respect the rhyme damages ever so slightly the simplicity of the
line about the quandary of the man 'who loves but is not loved'. Note also the
assimilation of love with the practice of religion. The man whose love is
shunned, is like an empty shell, a chapel on the hill where mass is never
celebrated.
In a clear reference to romantic love that pledges to last forever and does not
even depend on frequent visual contact (this bit is somewhat lost in the
translation) the Cretan lover identifies completely with his sweetheart.
"����� �� �� �� ������ ��' �� �� �� ����������
��' �� �� �� ��� ��� �� ��� �� �� ��� ��� �����."
(Living apart, by no means, my love for you belies
For I breathe with your breath and see with your eyes.)
Interestingly, love is not portrayed only as the soul's tumult that sweeps
everything on its path but also as the crowning of a long, close relationship that
is more the mark of a successful marriage than the sudden explosion of a coup
de foudre. The long, intimate relation between the sand and the sea on the
seashore used here to portray a love relation of long standing is quite unusual in
Greek folk poetry.
"O������� ��' ��������� ����' � ������ ��� ����
����� �� ��� ����� ��� ��� ����� ��� ��� ����."
(The seashore draws to its lap the sand day and night
Without you I'm miserable, I miss you my delight.)
One should not miss the delights of this book. Professor Spyridakis merits a
prize of some sort. Is anyone reading this column in the ministry of culture?
http://www.athensnews.gr/athweb/nathens.prnt_article?e=C&f=&t=04&m=A43&aa=5
~MarciaH
Fri, Mar 8, 2002 (22:15)
#56
Hmmm wonder why I hated the "forget" buttons? It has been a while since I had anything amorous come to my attention. I would love to have that book!